It was so hard to see her smiling and laughing anymore nowadays. Cause she always seemed so moody during lesson time. But today she was completely different. I like her today.lol I still like in whatever mood she is in. Well I noticed that she doesnt like to teach with the whole students in the class she will seem very sad and dont feel like teaching but when it was narrowed down to only those taking O level she seemed cheerful and happy go lucky like how I used to know her. Btw the practical today was fun. Ya right. I hate practical but then cause got her I have patient doing it.

She would come to me and asked how I was doing then I told her, I hate this experiment I do it 3 times and I was one of the last one to finish the practical. Then I told her what if my readings not correct then she was like nevermind only minus 1 mark for it. Then I was like 1 mark, 1 mark is alot. Then she was like I know you want get it all perfect right. Then I nodded. Then she laughed. Then when I was about to go to the desk to give her my ws she was like,"How perfectionist can do??" Then I was lol can. But 1 second later she called and told me my graph totally wrong. I was like what the fish must redo again. I dont like when I keep doing wrong things!!! Then I redo and return to her.

Then that Zuhairi was beside her and I returned her the ws smiling. Then he was like dont give me that face. I was like lol. My problem i know I cute.haha. The best think was she supported me. Haha thanks to her. I win him.lol. She is so great today I wished she was like that everyday.

Hmmm, I wonder, is she??? I dont know but I think the signs are obvious?? Or I am just bad at guessing but I think she would have told me if she were. Anyways I like her alot.

What I have learnt from the creative writing is multi-sensory approach. All the 5 senses- touch, hearing, smell, sight and not sure the last one sorry. Thoughts and Feelings. Details. Details.Details!

sense of sight:

• silhouette of the man
• beam of battery lamp on his face
• eyes were hard and blue like two frozen lakes
• white light touch the leaves with wet silver
• gleamed with the quivering shine of scattered quicksilver
• moon was hidden behind long,high parallels of cloud which hung like suspended streamers of dirty cotton wool in the sky.
• shoes sank into he soil and left exact,ridged foot prints,
• down the avenues of trees
• face as invisible except for a blur of shadowed hollows and lighter crags
• stared ahead into a half-light

sense of hearing:

• the night close around was quiet now
• monotonous creek-creek-creek
• cricket stop their small noises
• brarking in short high yaps
• leaves rustled with a harsh wispering
• solid strip of high pitch sound
• small noises
• laces click as he move
• small metallic noise

sense of touch:

• a chill in the air
• the coolness of the night
• night and earth was cold and damp
• warmly dressed
• pressing it hard
• shivered now with chill

sense of smell:

• sharp,bitter-sweet citrus smell hung gently on the night air
• called softly
• pleasent sense of lemons
• perfume of lemons seem to grow stronger
• fragrant growth

other details:

• small bicycle lantern that work from a battery
• stopped abruptly
• wore khaki trousers and laced -up riding boots,and an old shooting jacket with leather patcheson the right breast and the elbows
• clenching his teeth to prevent from chattering
• flanked him
• Darkness demanded silence
• The night and earth was cold and damp
• Tiny wrinkled and deep creases which covered the red-clay complexion of his face like the myriad lines which indicate rivers,streams,roads and railways on a map.

high value words:

Abruptly - suddenly

Jeered - said in a rude manner.

Half-light - not too bright

corduroyed leg - wear jeans

Chuckle - said with some laughter.
Audacity - guts
Uncivilized - rude

Minister of church - priest

Blur of shadowed hollows and lighter crags - wrinkles.